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Peyton’s entrance was to be expected, but his heart caught all the same----she looked beautiful, too beautiful almost, he wanted to admit. “Hey” you look great. Congratulations again Luke. “Thanks… you look nice Peyton, thanks for coming.” “Yeah well, thought I’d come by and say hi to the gang before I head out.” “So it’s true… you’re not coming to the wedding ?” “ I think I’ve stuck around long enough she added , disappointement coating her words.” “ Peyton----?, Lucas started” Lucas don’t… I have to go now, best of luck okay” she added before giving him a kiss on the cheek. Lucas turned to watch her go, overcoming the sudden urge to go after her. This day was too special to Lindsey , to throw Peyton in her face once again , he let her be and turned to meet that all to knowing smile of his of his best friend Haley. “ Isn’t it bad luck to see the bride before the wedding?” Haley asked jokingly noting Peyton’s entrance and exit. “ Funny Hales”. “Hey, I got you to crack a smile, you’ve been so serious all morning”, she said with a raised brow.